Nov 21, 2010

Soulmates...


11:58 PM:
He had just lived his worst day.. Or so he hoped. Tommorrow's agenda though had some real potential to shatter this hope. And he knew he was going to have to deal with it. Tommorrow it was! No more running away from it. Without even realizing it, he had spoken the last few words aloud. The sound of his voice seemed unusually hoarse, slightly surprising him to the extent that he looked around from the corner of his eye to ascertain that nobody else was around. No one was. The dillipated villa was deserted as he had known it to be for years. Yet at this place, in all its solitude had helped him find solace amidst all his predicaments. Ironically it would be here that he would have to face the toughest challenge of his life. He walked away from there knowing he had one more night to live... to dream...
1:29 AM :
Sweat beads rolling down his temple, the soft linen pillow didn't feel so comforting to his restless mind
2:56 AM :
He had heard something. Or was it him breathing? Yes, it was definitely him breathing in short almost hurried gasps of air.
3:34 AM :
It was just a futile exercise, all of this. He picked up the weapon...and hoped he picked up pieces of himself too. This job would need the whole of him. And more probably.
4:46 AM :
The villa stood there in front of him uninviting in the moonlight. For all the beautiful memories he had here with her would be marked today.
4:48 AM :
She was there. He'd pictured this all night and had prayed that his sight would betray his vision. It was but as truthful as his love for her.
She: 'You know I love you, right?'
He:(muffled, almost choked voice)'I kn.. know'
She: 'Then you will do as I want you to do'

Her voice was ruthless, cold almost alien to his senses. He looked up. Her face glowed like it did on the nights they spent time alone at the villa lost deep into each others eyes... Chasing each other... Playing like toddlers... Teaching each other.. Living the other persons life in their minds eye.. For years.. decades.. centuries..
She : 'It would be quick and you wouldn't even know'
He : 'Quick! It is not the pain that scares me.. It is losing this! You are all I have.. No body else'
She : 'But we must complete what was such a beautiful story. The story of two beings coming together. We have lived glorious lives. It is time to depart.. Our separate ways!'
He : 'You will come back again won't you?'
She : 'Where else would a poor soul go?'
He : 'It is indeed a scary world out there. And so you will wait here.'

He drew out the weapon and pierced it through her ghastly pearly white...yet stunning beautiful body.
He : 'You know I love you, right?'
She :(muffled, almost choked voice) 'I kn.. know'
He : 'Then you will do as I want you to do.. It would be quick and you wouldn't even know'
She : 'Quick! It is not the pain that scares me.. It is losing this! You are all I have! No body else'
He : 'But we must complete what was such a beautiful story. The story of two beings coming together. We have lived glorious lives. It is time to depart.. Our separate ways!'
She : 'You will come back again won't you?'
He : (pause)
He : 'It is indeed a scary world out there. And so you will wait here.'

He departed leaving his soul behind. She stayed watching her soul drift by.

4 comments:

  1. I don't know how you will interpret this. I had something in mind when I wrote this. But it would be fun if someone made sense of the story in some other way.. made sense is any way is good enough for starters :p

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  2. I dont know, But its making no sense to me at all.. maybe coz i am a little too drunk.. but still.. i guess MU answers made more sense than this ! :(

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  3. My two bits: The guy/girl killed the other party. The other party became a soul bound to that place. Why the person was willing to die is not known (maybe they were into a weed-influenced enactment of Hamlet :P)
    Some years/decades later, the guy/girl returned, in a delusional mindset and committed suicide, all the while imagining that his/her partner was killing him/her. The time the person killed himself/herself out of guilt for what he/she did.

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  4. Hmm .. Hari you've really let your imagination wander far on this one .. nice inter\pretation man
    @Ravi: Saale expected no less of you :p
    No wonder you were drunk. You puked on my post!
    BTW another friend commented on this post someplace else.. he said to him it was a battle between the body and the soul. And the soul having loved the body so much.. now that it was worn down .. left it for the world beyond...
    Woh bhi sahi tha..

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